viernes, 25 de marzo de 2011

Commenting on Others Blog!

Edricks Blog:
 Edricks essay had many important info. that not many of use knew about. His conclusion was very good because he was right about what he stated. It was well written and everything was organized! I bet he put a lo tof effort into it. :)

http://edrickimmigrationfacts.blogspot.com/

Genderies Blog:
  - Genderies blog had many interesting facts all through out her essay. Her statements were written the correct way and her topic was well developed. She makes us realize what these Indians went through and all the things they had to change to become like the white. This is something no one wants to do, be like others!

http://gingersimmigration.blogspot.com/

Nestors Blog:
- The first thing that caught my attention was his interesting title. It was very unique and catchy. It was a long essay but it was excelently written. He used many proper words that made it more profesional. I liked his conclusion because he made it different although he stated his opinion. He is right about the government still owning them money and who knows if theyll ever pay up.

http://nestor40.blogspot.com/

Tiffanys Blog:
- Her introduction was amazing beacuse it quickly caught my attention adn she stated all her facts. She really put feelings into her essay but she still told what happened without being too bias. I like her opinion on the conclusion. It is true that both acted the wrong way and that the war could have been prevented. Good Job :)

http://www.somethingbytiffany.blogspot.com/

Hiomarks Blog:
- I like many of his comments on the subject. He says that the white think that the Indians were "savages and hostil". That is very true because one of the main reasons for the Indians to assimilate was beacuse whites though they were not capable of doing anything. He  also says that "alcohol was the destroyer of the indians life" and that was one reason. Very interesting!

http://hiomark-taino.blogspot.com/

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